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My eyes are scorched,
but the image burns on...
my lips are crimson,
yet the song plays on...
all hope is exorcised,
still possessed by desire...
waiting to live,
I die everyday.....
all hope is exorcised,
still possessed by desire...
waiting to live,
I die everyday.....
***
1 The receding waveslides quickly down my leg
fleeing as if
the very touch of my skin
contaminates it....
I cannot look away,
my gaze is locked
on its silken retreat exposing me
in its hurried
yet graceful abandonment.
I stand there
foolishly hoping
the next time
the swirling waters
seek me, caress me,
they but look back.....
a return,
filled with regret
fuelled by longing.
They never stagnate,
never pause
the desertion a ritual,
a game played
over and over again.
I turn around
walk back
to the sands
that cling fiercely
emboldened by
the wet skin's weak defence.
I sprinkle them along the way,
remnants of a lost love
that I will seek many times over -
a trace to follow
my return but
a looking back,
filled with regret
fuelled by longing.....
to replay the ritual of desertion,
no longer just a game,
but a surrender to be played
over and over again ***

2 comments:
Very good. The ideas and powerful word pictures touched me quietly. After a long time your poem left some sort of unidentifiable deep sense of longing...don't know what!
What powerful images and emotions! In agreement to what Mr. Mohanram has mentioned, I find myself longing for something long after the poem ended. And even I don't know what. Poetry is strange . . .
Big hugs and much love,
Susan
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