Monday, November 15, 2010

Snippets : Collection of untitled poems



                        2

                        My eyes are scorched,
                        but the image burns on...
                        my lips are crimson,
                        yet the song plays on...
                       all hope is exorcised,
                       still possessed by desire...
                       waiting to live,
                       I die everyday.....

                          ***
                    
1   The receding wave
slides quickly down my leg
fleeing as if
the very touch of my skin
contaminates it....

I cannot look away,
my gaze is locked
on its silken retreat exposing me
in its hurried
yet graceful abandonment.

I stand there
foolishly hoping
the next time
the swirling waters
seek me, caress me,
they but look back.....
a return,
filled with regret
fuelled by longing.

They never stagnate,
never pause
the desertion a ritual,
a game played
over and over again.

I turn around
walk back
to the sands
that cling fiercely
emboldened by
the wet skin's weak defence.

I sprinkle them along the way,
remnants of a lost love
that I will seek many times over -
a trace to follow
my return but
a looking back,
filled with regret
fuelled by longing.....
to replay the ritual of desertion,
no longer just a game,
but a surrender to be played
over and over again
      ***
 

2 comments:

Mohanram said...

Very good. The ideas and powerful word pictures touched me quietly. After a long time your poem left some sort of unidentifiable deep sense of longing...don't know what!

Susan Deborah said...

What powerful images and emotions! In agreement to what Mr. Mohanram has mentioned, I find myself longing for something long after the poem ended. And even I don't know what. Poetry is strange . . .

Big hugs and much love,
Susan